Thursday 25 July 2019

A Piece Of Writing - Blogging Contract #6

Here is another blogging contract!!!
For writing we have been working on writing an exposition. For this exposition we were in groups and had to write about our point of view, Should students be allowed to bring cellphone to school? What do you think?

Should students be allowed to bring cellphones to school?


Cellphones are definitely NOT suitable in educational facilities!
Do you want your children to have square eyes and be tired and grumpy on a daily basis?
Cell Phones distract pupils from completing given work and following teachers’ rules and instructions as they are accordingly 
‘extremely addictive’. 
A phone is too small, too hard to operate and too hard to change settings to complete work on apps such as Google Drive.  


It is said that using your phone too often on a daily basis can make children (or even adults) grumpy and tired, easily. 
Studies show that children under the age of 13 are limited to around 2hrs of screen time per day. If they bought their phones to
school then the amount of screen time would be raised to about 6hrs per day. 
Using a phone throughout the day can simulate the brain and make it harder for kids to go to sleep. 


Cell Phones distract children from completing set tasks and following teachers’ rules and instructions as they are said to be
‘very addictive.’ Working on a phone will mean that you can not get Hapara because they are your personal device, not a school
one. Because there is no Hapara, children will stop their work and go on popular social media like Snapchat, Instagram, or Tic
Tok. Or very addictive games.  They would not be listening to what the teacher is saying as they will be busy texting their friends.
This is one reason why students should not be allowed cellphones at school. 


A phone is too small, too hard to operate and too hard to change settings to complete work on apps such as Google Drive,
where as a computer, chromebook or laptop has a much bigger screen. 
When using Google Slides on a cellphone, you cannot add or duplicate slides, so isn’t great for doing long essays/presentations
for school. 
Especially on (smaller) phones, it is harder to type using the phones’ keyboard so when writing long pieces it is easier to spell
words wrong and to complete work fast.  


In conclusion, we believe that students should NOT bring their cellphones to school as they can make the pupils very tired
and grumpy, they distract students from completing given work and listening to teachers rules and instructions and they are
too small, too hard to operate and too hard to change settings on apps such as Google Drive.  

By Reagan Boniface, Mia Prendergast, Iris Reynolds and Arielle Perchig-Gibli

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Iris
    It is Molly here from Totara 4
    I agree with you. If all children bring there cell phones to school then the teachers will go mad.Your introduction was really good. You got straight to the point. Maybe next time you could make the lines shorter because it is really hard to read.Why did you pick this subject?
    Blog you later
    Molly

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    1. Kia Ora Molly!
      The Teacher would go completely insane!! We were given this subject by Miss Hines, the whole class got into groups and had to write their point of view.
      Blog you later!!
      (I love that, and it is now going to be my new farewell on commenting, Thanks Molly!!!)
      Iris

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  2. Hey Iris,

    I really like the way you have writt so much on your blog. Maybe next time you could make sure that all of the words fit on the page before posting as it is hard to read.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.