Wednesday 6 March 2019

The Mines Afire Diary Entry

For this activity we had to write a diary entry from a character of our choice. I choose a man called Thomas Beaman who has a son that I created called Scott Beaman. Scott has two sisters called Sally and Lucy. I really writing diary entry, this one I wrote is a bit long - like all the writing I do - but I hope you enjoy!



2 comments:

  1. Hey Iris.
    Wow thank you for sharing your writing with us! I love the way you hook your reader with the detail that you use. Are you enjoying the novel? I can't believe how many children were left without a father. It is so sad. Are you looking forward to our trip? I know I am because I like learning outside of the classroom.
    Keep up the awesome work Iris.
    Miss H

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    1. Hey Miss Hines!!!
      Thanks for your comment!!
      I am enjoying the novel it is really good! I could believe so many people were left without sons, brothers, husbands, or fathers either! It would be impossible to imagine that happening to my Dad. How about you? I am looking forward to our trip, it would be interesting to find out more about the Brunner mine site!!

      Iris

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